Persuasive Writing-Brushing Teeth

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.
Brushing Teeth

Teeth are important for chewing our food.
We need to look after them.

So I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Firstly I think we should brush our teeth every day

so that our teeth are healthy and strong.

When you Brush your teeth you can wash

the bacteria a way.

Secondly I think we should brush our teeth
every day because our teeth might get yuck
if don’t brush our teeth so if you leave
the food in your mouth bacteria can make holes in your teeth.

Thirdly I think we should brush our teeth everyday so

we can protect our teeth from the bacteria.

When you wash your teeth the bacteria
can go away and then your teeth will be safe.

So that’s why I think we should brush our teeth every day.

My Term 2 Learning Goals

I will try my best to achieve my learning goals.

I 

Recount Writing-At Jump

At Jump

“I can jump higher than you!” shouted my big brother.

In the sunny holidays me, my brother and my papa

went to Jump in Whangarei. It was Saturday afternoon.

We were so excited. We were jumping up and down

and giving each other high fives. We couldn’t wait to get there.

The first thing we did when we got there was

playing in the games room. It was fun because they had a hoop and we played shoots.

Next we played shoots on the trampoline.

That was hard because we kept on jumping high.

When we tried to shoot we just bounced too high

and we kept missing the hoop. To work out the problem we did some slam dunks.

We jumped from the trampoline to the hoop. It was much easier to do that.

After that my papa found a course for us to try.

We had to jump on these rings that were hanging from a bar.

You had to twist and try and swing to the next ring without falling.

If you fell you had to go back to the start. It was pretty hard but we did it.

I only fell once. My brother fell twice.

My papa was able to do it without falling on his first try.

I said to papa, “Good job Papa.” I gave him a hug.

We really enjoyed going to Jump with our papa.

It was cool.

Recount Writing:Rugby league.

Rugby league by MANUERA TOMURI-GRACE

On one foggy Sunday morning I travelled with Matua Matt to the Whangarei Rugby fields to play rugby league.                                               I felt happy when we got to the fields and we put our boots on and our uniform.

Next we were playing Manaia and I felt tired.

After that we had a feed by Matua Matts van. Some of the players brought lunch to share and Matua Matt bought us some pizza. It was cool. I felt awesome.

After our feed we went for a swim at a lake.And Dallas-Rae jumped off this big rock.

Matua Matt said, “If you jump off this big rock I will give you a drink.”

Dallas said, “Yes.” So he jumped off.Then me and Matua Matt and my friends got dropped off.

I went to training yesterday. We were soaked and cold.

Rugby league by MANUERA TOMURI-GRACE

On one foggy Sunday morning I travelled with Matua Matt to the Whangarei Rugby fields to play rugby league.                                               I felt happy when we got to the fields and we put our boots on and our uniform.

Next we were playing Manaia and I felt tired.

After that we had a feed by Matua Matts van. Some of the players brought lunch to share and Matua Matt bought us some pizza. It was cool. I felt awesome.

After our kai we went for a swim at a lake and Dallas-Rae jumped off this big rock.

Matua Matt said, “If you jump off this big rock I will give you a drink.”

Dallas said, “Yes.” So he jumped off.Then me and Matua Matt and my friends got dropped off.

I went to training yesterday. We were soaked and cold.

My 2019 learning wall.

Here is my great leaning wall.It tells me what level I should be on and what level I am on.

My Goal setting term 1 2019.

I will work hard to achieve my Goals.

Recount Writing-Another League Game.

I am learning to use thoughts and feelings in my recount writing.

On a cold Sunday morning me and some of my rugby league team went to rugby league. We traveled to Whangarei with Matua Matt in his van. It was cool traveling together in the van.

When we arrived at the rugby league fields we were excited. We were versing the Otangarei Knights.

The game was pretty tough because Otangarei Knights were good league players. We lost by one point and we were feeling disappointed. Then we lost the whole game but it was alright. I can’t wait for my next game.

On our way home we stopped to have a swim and we had pizza for lunch at the lake. It was awesome. We had a cool day.