explain writing- sample

here is my explain writing for my marae

My Goal setting term 4 2019

Recount Writing-In the holiday

During the holiday, me and my papa and my two brothers went to
Russell for the holiday day. 

First we found the stock. Next we saw a swing that was 
by the beach. After that me and my brother threw some rocks in
the water to see if a rock can go the longest.

Then we went to the bridge and my brother went down the
ladder
and saw some fish. Later on we went on the ferry back to
Waitangi.

Finally we went to the park when we came back from
Russell. 

I thought that holiday was super cool.

My keyring

On Firday me and my class made keyrings for father's day.

On my dads birthday

On Saturday it was my dad’s birthday. Me and my family went to mini golf in Kerikeri. I thought it was going to be cool. At the end of the course, my dad came 1st. And I came 2nd. It was alright.  I had a bag of mars bars and a little gumball machine. 

After the mini golf we went to the park by McDonalds in Kerikeri. It was so fun at the park. When we got to the park we had pizza. It was delicious.

Me and my papa went to Mcdonalds to get a frozen coke. Then when we got the frozen coke it was as cold as ice and I had a brain freeze. I thought it was painful

I had blueberry frozen coke. It was yummy.   

Statistical investigation

                                           WALT ask questions for an investigation  
                                            WALT display our data on a bargraph 
                                             WALT make a statement about the informatoin            
                 

                                                I did an investigation about favourite cars in our class.
                                                I asked the people in my class, "What is your favourite car?"
                                                Here is my graph.

Recount Writing-Going to the movies.

Going to the movies.
WALT use more interesting words and
phrases in our Recount Writing.
On a hot Sunday morning me and my family
went to Kerikeri to see the movies.
We were watching the Lion King.
I was grinning from ear to ear and jumping
up and down with excitement.
I was giving a high five in the air.
My mum bought the tickets and some yummy munchies.

We went to our seat with our popcorn and ice-cream.
My mum and my dad and my aunty were at the  back seats.
I was in the front row seats. 

When the movie started everyone was not talking.
They were watching the movie.
The movie was amazing because the animals looked real.

We had so much fun in the movie. I really enjoyed it. 

I said to my mum, “Mum that movie was so incredible.
I loved it.”

When the movie was done  we went to Subway for lunch.